The proportions are spot on--but the neck seems a little oddly positioned. You did a really great job! Keep it up.
I like the style, and the monochrome-type coloring, it adds a real comic-y feel. I actually laughed, so points for that. Great job overall! You should definitely make more comics from conversations you and your friends have.
There isn't really much you can improve here, at least nothing I can think of.
thanks for the review! im glad it made you laugh. I really do wanna start doing more comics, so hopefully you'll see more up here!
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